Short Story Review: “Child of the Mountain” by Gunnar de Winter

Clarkesworld Magazine Issue 220, January 2025 /Story Link/

Chime is a bioengineered, possibly immortal child who serves the sisters of a religious order on a remote mountain. Chime is tasked with initiating the resurrection of each sister after death, by retrieving a “seed” from their skulls once the vultures have picked their bones clean. Chime then regrows the sister’s nervous system and places it in a printed body. However, over the years, Chime has developed her own ideas on how best to advance the order’s goals.

This is dark and bloody dystopian SF, though maybe not quite horror. The descriptive language is excellent, if grisly. I was curious about the guiding philosophy of the sisters, but scant evidence beyond a few suggestive allusions is present. This vagueness of purpose colored by reaction to the story, and to the decisions Chime makes. There is a reference to an “infinite wheel”, suggesting the cycle of death and resurrection is central to whatever it is they are devoted to. Otherwise, if the sisters are capable of creating an immortal body like Chime’s, why not resurrect themselves into one after death? The sister’s seem content to observe world calamity from their perch and do nothing about it, so perhaps the author is suggesting that religious devotion is self -indulgent and regressive. This begs the question of what Chime expects to achieve by changing the rules of the game. The ending suggests that Chime will “do more than observe” but still with little indication of her ultimate goals. It left a bit of a sour taste in my mouth.

Short Story Review: “When There Are Two of You: A Documentary” by Zun Yu Tan

Clarkesworld Issue 220, January 2025 (Story Link)

As the title suggests, this short story is structured as a series of interviews. The interviewees are all people who use, or have used, a new technology called Sentience, which is literally a digital copy of yourself, implanted in your own head to help make you a better you. The two main interviewees are Walter Lee II, the first Android built to house a sentience, who continues on after his original self dies; and Joyce Chu, who comes to believe her Sentience may not have all the answers.

This loosely structured story is surprisingly light on tension, especially considering the premise seems built for it. The final decisions that Walter II and Joyce make are understandable, but not surprising or particularly bold. Despite the intriguing concept, the whole package didn’t quite gel for me. Joyce’s final choice regarding her Sentience made me wonder if her Sentience was really the problem. It’s hard to be sure if that was the point.

Short Story Review: “Vast and Trunkless Legs of Stone” by Carrie Vaughn

Clarkesworld #201, June 2023

Carrie Vaughn’s latest is a first contact story, one that takes a scenario used hundreds of times before, then adds a rather unusual and ingenious wrinkle that makes for a thoughtful and exciting read. The protagonist, Mal, is chosen for the one-on-one meeting with a representative of a newly arrived alien race known simply as the Mapmakers. Mal is chosen because the Mapmakers insist on meeting with someone who is not in any way a “leader”, and the Mapmaker Summit Committee decided Mal was the best choice because, “she’s kind, she listens, and everyone likes her”. Mal is rehearsed and fed a lot of talking points they want her to cover (the usual stuff about technology, etc.). But the Mapmaker representative has a different idea of how they want the conversation to go. Vaughn, one of the most efficient storytellers in SFF, offers just the right amount of buildup before throwing the reader a curveball, one that is by turns intriguing, understandable, and kind of hilarious. I really enjoyed the effort Mal and the Mapmaker put into trying to have a natural conversation, even while many of the nuances in such an exchange are difficult to delineate. Another excellent story from a genuine pro.