Hugo 2023 Fiction Finalists – The Reckoning

The Hugo ballot is (finally) here! First, a hearty congratulations to all of the finalists. Everyone on this list works hard at their craft, and at building a loyal fan base, and deserves the recognition they get.

A few months ago when voting for the Hugo Awards began, I posted my predictions for what I thought would appear on the final ballot in the fiction categories and wrote that I would return to the scene of the crime when the finalists were announced to tally my score. I did pretty good overall, except in the short story category. I mention in the previous article that I had no way of knowing how much Chinese voters would affect the outcome, and it turned out that Best Short Story was the place where they made the most difference. I am pleased to be wrong in this case because I was hoping Chinese fans would get their say, and they did.

I said I would also reveal the picks on my own ballot. Now, I have seen over the last fifteen years or so my own tastes and those of the “mainstream” Hugo voters have diverged, but this is the first time in my personal Hugo voting history that not a single work on my ballot was a finalist in the fiction categories. To clarify just how far apart we’ve moved: in 2010, I had 3 novels, 2 novellas, 1 novelette, and 2 short stories from my nominating ballot make the final list. In the 13 years since, I have had only 8 Best Novel nominees on my ballot, and never more than one in a given year; 10 novella nominations, though none since 2020; 8 novelette picks, though not more than one in a single year since 2011 (though two of these were winners, in 2011 and 2016); only 3 short story finalists, and none since 2017 (“That Game We Played During the War”, by Carrie Vaughn). But this year is the first year I’ve ever scored a big fat donut hole in all four categories – though in fairness, as you will see, I predicted as much.

Best Novel

The Finalists
  • The Daughter of Doctor Moreau, by Silvia Moreno-Garcia (Del Rey)
  • The Kaiju Preservation Society, by John Scalzi (Tor Books)
  • Legends & Lattes, by Travis Baldree (Tor Books)
  • Nona the Ninth, by Tamsyn Muir (Tordotcom)
  • Nettle & Bone, by T. Kingfisher (Tor Books)
  • The Spare Man, by Mary Robinette Kowal (Tor Books)
My Predictions (5 out of 6)
  • The World We Make, by N.K. Jemisin (Orbit Books)
  • The Kaiju Preservation Society, by John Scalzi (Tor Books)
  • Legends & Lattes, by Travis Baldree (Tor Books)
  • Nona the Ninth, by Tamsyn Muir (Tordotcom)
  • Nettle & Bone, by T. Kingfisher (Tor Books)
  • The Spare Man, by Mary Robinette Kowal (Tor Books)
My Ballot (0 out of 5)
  • Ymir, by Rich Larson (Orbit Books)
  • 36 Streets, by T.R. Napper (Titan Books)
  • The Dabare Snake Launcher, by Joelle Presby (Baen Books)
  • Eversion, by Alastair Reynolds (Orbit Books)
  • The Court-Martial of the Renegat Renegades, by Kristine Kathryn Rusch (Asimov’s Science Fiction, Sep/Oct – Nov/Dec)

The Daughter of Doctor Moreau is a pleasant surprise. This is Moreno-Garcia’s first Hugo nomination, though she has finished below the cutoff multiple times as an editor and as an author. Her novel Mexican Gothic just missed out in 2021, finishing seventh. It looks as if her Hugo fanbase is growing.

I really didn’t expect anything on my ballot to make the cut. Eversion may have been the only one within throwing distance, tough it’s likely it won’t even appear with the “nominations below cutoff” when the figures are released. Rusch’s novel is my personal favorite. This serialization was very popular with Asimov’s readers, but it doesn’t seem like there are enough of those left in the Hugo voting pool to get anything on the list in any category. Fun fact, the last time a serialized novel was nominated for a Hugo was Rollback by Robert J. Sawyer, which appeared in Analog from October 2006 – January 2007, though it also appeared as a stand-alone book during its eligibility year. The last time a serialized novel was nominated when only appearing as a serial during its eligibility year was Shadrach in the Furnace by Robert Silverberg, which appeared in Analog from August – October 1976. What could have been, if only my fellow Diving Universe fans were Hugo voters.

Best Novella

The Finalists
  • Even Though I Knew the End, by C.L. Polk (Tordotcom)
  • Into the Riverlands, by Nghi Vo (Tordotcom)
  • A Mirror Mended, by Alix E. Harrow (Tordotcom)
  • Ogres, by Adrian Tchaikovsky (Solaris)
  • What Moves the Dead, by T. Kingfisher (Tor Nightfire)
  • Where the Drowned Girls Go, by Seanan McGuire (Tordotcom)
My Predictions (5 out of 6)
  • Even Though I Knew the End, by C.L. Polk (Tordotcom)
  • Into the Riverlands, by Nghi Vo (Tordotcom)
  • A Mirror Mended, by Alix E. Harrow (Tordotcom)
  • A Prayer for the Crown-Shy, by Becky Chambers (Tordotcom)
  • What Moves the Dead, by T. Kingfisher (Tor Nightfire)
  • Where the Drowned Girls Go, by Seanan McGuire (Tordotcom)
    My Ballot (0 out of 5)
    • “Kingsbury 1944”, by Michael Cassutt (Analog, Sep/Oct)
    • The Sins of Our Fathers, by James S.A. Corey (Orbit Books)
    • “Kora is Life”, by David D. Levine (Clarkesworld #188, May)
    • “Polly and (Not) Charles Conquer the Solar System”, by Carrie Vaughn (Clarkesworld #191, Aug)
    • “Communion” by Jay Werkheiser and Frank Wu (Analog, Jan/Feb)

    When making my predictions for this category, I joked “Much like Thanos, Becky Chambers is inevitable and can seemingly conjure up a Hugo nomination with a snap of her fingers. There are none powerful enough to stop her, nor brave enough to try.” So of course she’s the one prediction I got wrong. I have not read Ogres yet but I’m a huge Tchaikovsky fan so I’m looking forward to it.

    The only nomination on my ballot I thought had an outside chance of being a finalist was Sins of our Fathers, an excellent coda to the widely popular Expanse series. The rest were all personal favorites. It’s difficult enough for anything in this category not published by Tor to score a nomination; if your novella is magazine published – even by a (fre)e-zine like Clarkesworld – your chances are diminished even further.

    Best Novelette

    The Finalists
    • “The Difference Between Love and Time”, by Catherynne M. Valente (Someone in Time: Tales of Time-Crossed Romance, Solaris)
    • “A Dream of Electric Mothers”, by Wole Talabi (Africa Risen: A New Era of Speculative Fiction, Tordotcom)
    • “If You Find Yourself Speaking to God, Address God with the Informal You”, by John Chu (Uncanny Magazine, July-August 2022)
    • “Murder By Pixel: Crime and Responsibility in the Digital Darkness”, by S.L. Huang (Clarkesworld, December 2022)
    • “The Space-Time Painter”, by Hai Ya (Galaxy’s Edge, April 2022)
    • “We Built This City”, by Marie Vibbert (Clarkesworld, June 2022)
    My Predictions (3 out of 6)
    • “The Difference Between Love and Time”, by Catherynne M. Valente (Someone in Time: Tales of Time-Crossed Romance, Solaris)
    • “A Dream of Electric Mothers”, by Wole Talabi (Africa Risen: A New Era of Speculative Fiction, Tordotcom)
    • “If You Find Yourself Speaking to God, Address God with the Informal You”, by John Chu (Uncanny Magazine, July-August 2022)
    • “Two Hands, Wrapped in Gold”, by S.B. Divya (Uncanny Magazine May/June)
    • Six Deaths of the Saint, by Alix E. Harrow (Amazon Original Stories)
    • “In Mercy, Rain”, by Seanan Mcguire (Tor.com 7/18)
    My Ballot (0 out of 5)
    • “Solidity”, by Greg Egan (Asimov’s Sep Oct)
    • “Resilience”, by Monalisa Foster (Robosoldiers: Thank You for Your Servos; Baen Books)
    • “Cloudchaser”, by Tom Jolly (Analog Jan/Feb)
    • “The Sadness Box” by Suzanne Palmer (Clarkesworld #190 July)
    • “Necklace of Memory”, by Robert Reed (Asimov’s May/June)

    Five of the finalists were Nebula nominees, while I had predicted four of them to make the grade. One of my Nebula crossover picks didn’t pan out nor did my prediction that Seanan McGuire would score a Wayward Children hat trick this year. We also see the first of the Chinese-language nominees, “The Space-Time Painter” by Hai Ya. I suppose I may have to hit up Google translate when the voter packet comes out.

    Among the novelettes on my ballot, I thought Suzanne Palmer’s “The Sadness Box” had a decent chance of being a finalist, so much so that I considered making it one of my predictions. The unreasonably hopeful part of my brain thinks Egan and Reed always have a chance, even though it has been awhile since either were within arm’s reach of a Hugo.

    Best Short Story

    The Finalists
    • “D.I.Y.”, by John Wiswell (Tordotcom, August 2022)
    • “On the Razor’s Edge”, by Jiang Bo (Science Fiction World, January 2022)
    • “Rabbit Test”, by Samantha Mills (Uncanny Magazine, November-December 2022)
    • “Resurrection”, by Ren Qing (Future Fiction/Science Fiction World, December 2022)
    • “The White Cliff”, by Lu Ban (Science Fiction World, May 2022)
    • “Zhurong on Mars”, by Regina Kanyu Wang (Frontiers, September 2022)
    My Predictions (2 out of 6)
    • “Destiny Delayed”, by Oghenechovwe Donald Ekpeki (Asimov’s May/June)
    • “Give Me English”, by Ai Jiang (F&SF May/June)
    • “Bonsai Starships”, by Yoon Ha Lee (Beneath Ceaseless Skies 2/10)
    • “Skeleton Song”, by Seanan McGuire (Tor.com 10/26)
    • “Rabbit Test”, by Samantha Mills (Uncanny Magazine, November-December 2022)
    • “D.I.Y.”, by John Wiswell (Tordotcom, August 2022)
    My Ballot (0 out of 5)
    • “Beneath the Surface, a Womb of Ice”, by Deborah L. Davitt (Analog Nov/Dec)
    • “Boy in Key of Forsaken”, by Eric Del Carlo (Analog May/June)
    • “Timekeeper’s Symphony”, by Ken Liu (Clarkesworld #192 Sept)
    • “The Empty”, by Ray Nayler (Asimov’s Nov/Dec)
    • “Maximum Efficiency”, by Holly Schofield (Analog Nov/Dec)

    When I wrote that I had no way to predict how Chinese voters would impact the results, this is what I was talking about. At least I scored with the two English language nominees. I am curious to see how close I got with my other predictions when the full details are released in October. For now I’m looking forward to the hastily translated versions of the other stories appearing soon online!

    Ballot-wise, Ken Liu always gets some votes and Ray Nayler has slowly been raising his profile with award voters the last few years, but i still considered their chances distant. My Analog favorites had little chance, but they deserved my vote anyway.

    Final Predictions Score: 63% (15 out of 24)

    Final Ballot Score: 0% (0 out of 20)

    I will revisit these nominees with my reviews of the finalists in the short story and novelette categories at some point in the future. I have read Two of the Best Novel nominees (Moreau and Scalzi) and will try to find the time to read the other four before voting ends. I have not read any of the novella finalists and I will try to work my way through those as well.

    Novel Review: Translation State by Ann Leckie

    Orbit Books; June 6, 2023

    Rating: 2.5 out of 5.

    Ann Leckie’s latest novel is a standalone effort set in her award-winning Ancillary universe, though the term standalone should come with a caveat anytime it refers to a part of an already established canon. Translation State, like the previous standalone Provenance, offers an expanded understanding of the world Leckie established in her Radch trilogy, but probably shouldn’t be thought of as an entry point to the universe. It is also, for me, the least successful of Leckie’s novels, though seemingly still an essential one for her readers, as it delves into several aspects of the earlier novels that were left ambiguous or incomplete.

    The novel begins with three separate storylines that converge as the novel progresses. It kicks of with Enae, whose Grandmaman and sole benefactor has recently died. Enae finds hirself disinherited upon learning that Grandmaman had essentially been broke, and only managed to keep herself and Enae afloat by trading her estate and the family name to a nouveau riche upstart for a sizeable personal allowance. Luckily for Enae, Grandmaman had cooked up an agreement with this interloper to provide for hir (Enae) after her passing. So Enae is secured a position at the Office of Diplomacy, and sent on a errand to find out the whereabouts of, or to learn the ultimate fate of, a long missing Presger Translator. (For the uninitiated, the treaty with the alien Presger is the only thing keeping human civilization from crumbling, and the Translators – an engineered race of people separate from the Presger themselves – are essential to the treaty’s continued health.) Enae quickly learns that sie is not expected to actually complete the assignment, but simply to travel about and report back hir lack of success in doing so. Sie decides to make a go of it, anyway.

    The other two threads follow Reet, an orphan who gets caught up in the machinations of a political faction of displaced people known as the Hikipi, and Qven, an adolescent Presger Translator who is considered damaged goods after suffering a terrifying sexual assault. Explaining how the plot brings these disparate individuals together would spoil to much, though it quickly becomes clear that the confluence of circumstances has far-reaching implications for the upcoming Conclave, which was aggressively teased in Provenance and given even more weight here.

    Translation State has many of the attributes that won Leckie her loyal fan base: the social and political maneuverings; her tart, sometimes goofy sense of humor; the imaginative perils and pitfalls she throws in her characters’ paths. We get to learn more about the the Geck and the Rrrrrr, and especially the thoroughly fascinating Presger Translators, even if the Presger themselves are still shrouded in mystery.

    Where Translation State falls short for me – and it’s a pretty big fall – is in the three main characters themselves. Our introduction to Enae, who seemingly spent hir life up until Grandmaman’s death showing no real initiative or assertiveness (at least, not that we are made aware of) does nothing but when the plot requires sie do so, with little indication of what might have brought about this sea change. That sie fades somewhat into the background as Reet and Qven take center stage is not surprising. Those two characters, whom the main action of the novel is visited upon, are impossibly earnest, cloying in their preciousness – much in the way adults idealize adolescence, rather than being believably adolescent (a common problem in many YA novels). Not to mention (sorry if this is too spoilery) a big chunk of the novel deals with their growing bond of friendship, which consists entirely of them lying in bed and binge-watching a streaming show. This is a growing trend in science fiction – the lionizing of modern-day consumerist habits in a far-future setting – and until now I would have hoped an author of Leckie’s considerable gifts would steer clear of it, but here we are.

    As a harbinger of things to come, Translation State gives readers plenty to look forward to, but for this reader, at least, less to hold onto right now.

    Novel Review: Observer, by Robert Lanza and Nancy Kress

    Rating: 3.5 out of 5.

    Dr. Carolyn “Caro” Soames-Watkins is a promising neurosurgeon whose career is derailed when she reports a superior for sexual harassment. Unsure if there is a future for her in her chosen profession, she accepts an offer from her estranged great-uncle, the Nobel Prize winner Samuel Watkins, to join him at his institute in the Cayman Islands and to work on an exciting scientific breakthrough with himself and his partner, quantum physicist George Weigert.

    Caro is at first shocked by what she is being asked to do. The entire project revolves around Weigert’s theory of the “primacy of the observer”, which posits that consciousness is the author of reality, not the other way around as has long been assumed. Watkins and Weigert have created a microchip that, when implanted in the brain, can supposedly allow the recipient to enter an alternate reality of their own creation. They want Caro to implant them into several willing volunteers. Caro is unsure if – despite Weigert’s very detailed explanation of the theory and technology – she believes the implants can do what they claim or if they just offer the recipients a very detailed hallucination. She also has some ethical concerns about the primary purpose of the project: she learns her great-uncle is dying of pancreatic cancer and wants to enter an alternate reality where he is young and healthy again, but where his consciousness retains the lifetime of knowledge he acquired. Caro has few career options at the moment, and when her sister Ellen finds herself strapped with legal and financial problems, Caro agrees to stay with the project in exchange for direct assistance to Ellen.

    Nancy Kress has always had a gift for making cutting edge science both believable and digestible to readers, and this novel is no exception. Whether or not you believe the novel’s explanation of the primacy of the observer, authors Lanza and Kress continually find ways draw the reader into the emotional discoveries the characters make as they journey into uncharted scientific territory. This is the novel’s most commendable achievement. But Observer isn’t just a novel about the wonders of quantum physics; it is also a family drama, a romance, and a Crichton-esque technothriller complete with theft and murder and dangerous special interests willing to commit heinous acts to misuse, or destroy, the technology Watkins and Weigert have created. The pacing can get a little uneven at times as it skips uncomfortably from one mode to another, but this is a minor quibble. Observer will leave you better than it found you, and there are few better reasons to read a book than that.