Short Story Review: “Our Lady of the Gyre” by Doug Franklin

Analog Science Fiction and Fact, January/February 2025

Mel, who narrates the story, sails a ship around the Pacific that submerges captured carbon in the ocean in the form of diatoms. The “Lady” referred to in the title is an orbiting artificial intelligence who sends warnings about potential weather disasters. Years before, Mel’s wife was killed during one such disaster. Now, another weather event looms just as Mel takes on two young deck hands to help on his latest drift around the gyre (a ring-like rotation of ocean currents).

There is quite a lot going on in the world of this story, and the way the author gradually broadens the scope and scale of its background is the story’s best attribute. Our Lady of the Gyre is one of several AIs that take on a mythological importance in this future, and are frequently the subject of poetry and performance art, a detail I enjoyed a great deal. The narrator also refers to a sort of information chaos brought on by a reliance on generative AI, making it difficult for society to distinguish between fact and falsehood, and I wish the author had utilized this idea a little more than he did. The characters are agreeable and well-drawn and the plot moves along at a steady clip, though is a little light on suspense and surprise.

Short Story Review: “When There Are Two of You: A Documentary” by Zun Yu Tan

Clarkesworld Issue 220, January 2025 (Story Link)

As the title suggests, this short story is structured as a series of interviews. The interviewees are all people who use, or have used, a new technology called Sentience, which is literally a digital copy of yourself, implanted in your own head to help make you a better you. The two main interviewees are Walter Lee II, the first Android built to house a sentience, who continues on after his original self dies; and Joyce Chu, who comes to believe her Sentience may not have all the answers.

This loosely structured story is surprisingly light on tension, especially considering the premise seems built for it. The final decisions that Walter II and Joyce make are understandable, but not surprising or particularly bold. Despite the intriguing concept, the whole package didn’t quite gel for me. Joyce’s final choice regarding her Sentience made me wonder if her Sentience was really the problem. It’s hard to be sure if that was the point.